Demon Angel

This is an excerpt from the book I'm writing with Alex. I hope you like it. It was written by the character that I write for, Kasey Lynn Nicole. Let me know if it looks alright. Alex hasn't read this one yet. I wanna add it at the end of the book. Let me know! Thanks!!

"Hidden away from all, is a demon. The demon angel. She is thin, and quick footed. She has a terrible temper that is shown when her blue eyes flash a bloody red. When happy, they sparkle a crystal blue. Her black hair hangs in front of her face, showing her true evil. The demon angel as sharp, pointed fangs, like a vampire. And with them, she kills and takes blood. Her wings are pitch black with hints of shining silver. She has the power to shift the shape and heat, even the direction of burning flames. The demon angel is the devil's daughter. But, the demon angel is also a lover. The demon angel loves her family; her husband Ace, who is the Evil Angel from Heaven, and her son Adrian. They are her two halves. The demon angel is a beautiful, but deadly figure. She loves and she hates. She plays with the fires of hell, but adores the ice from above. She is gentle to her loved ones, but harsh with her enemies. The demon angel is perfection. And the demon angel...is me. -Kasey L. Nicole"

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- BloodyShadows